One thread weaving through The Tree You Come Home To is the trial proceedings. I don’t want to talk much about that here, but I will offer a couple of observations about the court room, including one that still makes me laugh. But first . . . I just said I wasn’t going to talk about the trial proceedings, and I won’t much, just this one incident involving people sitting behind us.

The defense attorney, the toad-like Brad Coffman, was laying into all the things that Casey had done wrong, implying that he was responsible for his own death. Some African American women began muttering (loudly), “So?” and “What difference does that make?” I don’t know who they were or why they were there, but I am so grateful to them!

That’s the sort of unexpected thing that can happen when you’re suddenly thrown into close proximity with people you don’t know, who may not be much like you, but who are sharing a space with you for long enough to make you companions, of a sort.

The second incident was just a comment my son Galen made. We were sitting on the court pews—the place was packed—and other cases were preceding ours. I wanted to listen (human interest, nothing prurient!), especially since a grandmotherly woman was responding to questions about her embezzling of $10,000. But the lawyers sitting at and leaning over the lawyer tables were talking too loudly to hear. Every once in awhile they’d pause to listen to something even they found interesting, but mostly it was as if they were killing time while awaiting their boarding call. It was clear they are important to all that was going on.

Galen leaned over and muttered, “They all look like douche bags.” It just cracked me up. Still does.

[As to a photo to illustrate this post, I looked for one of the statue of Lady Justice that’s inside our Justice Center, as well as photos of the Center itself or of a court room, but didn’t want to violate copyright. A photo of Galen makes sense (he did design the cover, after all), and you can imagine him making that comment when you look at that smile.]

Within a month after Casey died, friends and I started posting haiku. It began with Kathryn writing these two haiku:

Do not walk in pain.
Stay positive in the light.
Embrace your true friends

Monday morning now.
Someone should make me coffee.
Guess that would be me.

Funny, that second one, classic Kathryn.

People started responding. It surprised me that people who’d never tried to write one joined in, along with seasoned poets and professors. Sometimes the haiku talked back and forth, and other times they stood independently; some offered commentary on the writing process or on our seeming obsession with putting everything into verse. There was a series on the joy of new sneakers.

I loved the way my Fb community came together, rather like people did in the first waves of covid. So I put together a little book of our poems, made copies, and sent them to everyone who participated.

During one of the many, many revisions of The Tree You Come Home To, I started inserting some of the ones I’d written as a way to pause between sections.

Although all my sisters-in-law took part, Susan especially dove into the back-and-forth. I wrote:

I’d ride to find you
(if love were a big strong horse)
and bring you back home.

And Susan replied:

There are no answers
at the bottom of grief’s well
but the ground is firm.

I wrote:

my hands grasp at air 
every day the tear widens— 
will I split apart? 

And Susan answered:

No, you will not split
even if we don’t know how
we’ll hold together.

So, this post is my homage to our communities that support us, to our friends who join us when we strike out in some new way, who sooth and empathize, who share that tremendous love without which we really would split apart. One more example of our haiku conversations:

Mental Health. Today, I was thinking about mental health as it pertains to Tree. Initially, I was thinking of talking about it as a continuum, one that stretches infinitely in each direction, from blissed out ecstasy to suicide or murderous obsession. But there is no end point in either direction, is there? Where would destruction of Planet Earth belong? The smell of a kitten or an infant’s first smile? Where does a memory fit as it shifts over time? How many points on the line as we revise our past?

The other problem with a continuum is that it suggests that once you’re “here” or “there” you can go only in one of two directions, up or down. But my experience with mental health and mental illness tells me that it’s not so linear, or not always so, and that something more like ocean waves suggest the heaving and ebbing, returning and receding of mental health and illness.

Our mental wellbeing is something that we must nurture and cultivate even when we are stable and “happy.” And when we’ve been slapped down, we long for its return, often seeking it in ineffective, even damaging ways. I will have more to say tomorrow, maybe, when I talk a little about addiction.

At any rate, recovery from mental illness (situational or lifelong) is important enough to The Tree You Come Home To that my editor and publisher Jodie Toohey (more on her soon) asked if I’d be willing to donate 10% of the proceeds to NAMI, National Alliance on Mental Illness, and of course I said yes.

Counting down with a daily nugget regarding my memoir, The Tree You Come Home To, available in just 10 days! 

It’s two stories intertwined, that of my son Casey who was shot and killed in 2009 at the age of 20 and my own as I sought ways to find a way forward in this beautiful, difficult world. I began writing poems about Casey soon after he died, which make up a good part of Seeking the Other Side (Fleur de Lis Press). Writing about my internal life during the four years or so that followed became my part of this memoir. Casey’s story, from birth to death, came about when I realized mine was only half of our shared story.

After reading a good book I like to find and read the appreciation page. It has to be in that order: finish a good book, even better, a terrific book, then see who helped the author achieve that wonderful thing: writing a very good book, a fine book, one that stays with me for weeks.

It’s no easy thing, I’ve learned, to thank all the right people, not to forget your husband, for instance, or another pretty important person whose role may have been so significant that you forget to mention them. It doesn’t go without saying.

I recently sent my publisher my appreciation page for my upcoming memoir then three months later remembered someone I don’t want to leave out, so will be writing them into the galleys. How many more, I don’t like to think about.

The authors of the five most recent novels (and one memoir) I’ve read suggest what I’m talking about. They reveal a range of expressions—some I like better than others, but it’s only a matter of degree. They’re for someone else, after all.

James McBride ends his terrific Deacon King Kong with this one sentence: “Thanks to the humble Redeemer who gives us the rain, the snow, and all things in between.”

Charlotte McConaghy ends her Migrations with two pages, beginning with her editor, publicist, her UK editor, her “team of amazing friends,” and her family, and ends rather surprisingly close to McBride, with the “wild creatures of this earth” and “regret for those that have been wiped out and for love of those that remain.”

Laura Coleman’s pretty wonderful memoir, The Puma Years, closes with a more intimate two pages that begins with thanks to her parents and her “first readers,” her mother, her sister, her friends. She thanks the workers of Ambue Ari in Bolivia, the rescue center where she volunteered for years and where she met Wayra, the puma she developed such a powerful relationship with. She mentions all the animals by name, she thanks her editor, and says, “lastly, but never last, to the jungle.” The last paragraph is a reminder that wild animals are not pets and ways you can help.

Very different is Ayad Akhtar, author of Homeland Elegies, whose Acknowledgements place is a list of names only, a long sentence that ends with “and the American Academy in Rome—and always and for everything, Annika Boras.”

Douglas Stuart, author of Shuggie Bain, about a boy’s difficult struggle to save his mother from alcohol, closes with a short page, which begins, “Above all, I owe everything to the memories of my mother and her struggle, and to my brother who gave me everything he could. I am indebted to my sister for encouraging me to set this into words and share it with you.” That, after you’ve read the poignant, sad, brave story of Shuggie, will just grip you. It did me. His last sentence is a thank you to his partner: “The last words of this book belong to Michael Cary, he read it first, and nurtured the heart of it, like he always does.”

A good book will make you feel good, and a good acknowledgement will remind you that you do.

(*The picture that goes with this post shows two of the people at the top of my appreciation list, with me. It was a fun day, Alex’s 13th birthday. I like our silliness, too.)

The process of moving from manuscript to hand-held memoir is emerging as a series of little decisions. In the case of The Tree You Come Home To, the trickiest editorial decision has to do with how to mark the many instances where other people are quoted. Because so much of Casey’s story was lost to memory, I had to piece it together with a range of documents:

–Casey’s journal and other writing
–case notes from social workers and psychiatrists
–letters and emails Ken and I wrote to each other or to him or to Adrian (our middle son)
–interviews with friends and family, especially those closest to him

My smart publisher, Jodie Toohey, finally decided to differentiate between other people’s words and mine through indentations (rather than, for instance a font change). But sometimes the text moves in and out of quoting and reflecting several times on a page, so it’s easy to miss transitions. I like the way it looks now.

Another, rather amusing mistake we had to correct was when the ellipses (apparently I’m quite fond of them) started reproducing themselves. Here’s an example:

I had combed through the original manuscript so many times that most of the typos and unnecessary passages were cleaned up, but Jodie Toohey, who runs Legacy Book Press, found a lot more–inconsistent use of numbers and commas, for instance, rather humbling for an English professor.

Another decision—much more visible than these wayward ellipses—has been the cover. My son Galen designed it, but the placement of title, name, summary, and comments took several iterations. Fortunately, the cover designer Kaitlea Toohey, was willing to play with color and font and we came up with a really nice cover. First, a font we didn’t use, with the title up in the branches and my name down in the , then one we did:

I like the font and the cream color works well with the sunset yellow of the image. More on the cover another time.